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Looking for critique on my Youtube video(s)?

Posted: 15 Feb 2021, 20:00
by BXNGCNTRL
I started my Youtube channel a while ago. At first I was really bad at editing, didn’t write good scripts and made quite a few mistakes with pronunciations. I am starting to get better, but I want to improve more. Please feel free to give me tips and tops, regarding editing, content, voice over, etc. I would really appreciate it!

Here is the link to my latest video:
https://youtu.be/Z8OwIGa-xW0

Re: Looking for critique on my Youtube video(s)?

Posted: 15 Feb 2021, 20:17
by oogiebe
Good quality video.
Some observations. I'm always a tough reviewer when asked as you did. Being nice won't help you.

1-intro way too long
2-analytics a bit shallow
3-voiceover is more gameshow than boxing

I'd watch another if these items are addressed.

Just to be forthright, I couldn't do what you're doing, that's why I'm merely the audience. Good luck with your endeavor!

- Doug

Re: Looking for critique on my Youtube video(s)?

Posted: 15 Feb 2021, 20:54
by asmund
oogiebe wrote: 15 Feb 2021, 20:17 Good quality video.
Some observations. I'm always a tough reviewer when asked as you did. Being nice won't help you.

1-intro way too long
2-analytics a bit shallow
3-voiceover is more gameshow than boxing

I'd watch another if these items are addressed.

Just to be forthright, I couldn't do what you're doing, that's why I'm merely the audience. Good luck with your endeavor!

- Doug
+ 1. I couldnt top this in any way, but agree on advice for a nice view.

Re: Looking for critique on my Youtube video(s)?

Posted: 16 Feb 2021, 07:22
by BXNGCNTRL
oogiebe wrote: 15 Feb 2021, 20:17 Good quality video.
Some observations. I'm always a tough reviewer when asked as you did. Being nice won't help you.

1-intro way too long
2-analytics a bit shallow
3-voiceover is more gameshow than boxing

I'd watch another if these items are addressed.

Just to be forthright, I couldn't do what you're doing, that's why I'm merely the audience. Good luck with your endeavor!

- Doug
Thank you very much for your feedback!!