Looking for critique on my Youtube video(s)?

[BXNGCNTRL]

I started my Youtube channel a while ago. At first I was really bad at editing, didn’t write good scripts and made quite a few mistakes with pronunciations. I am starting to get better, but I want to improve more. Please feel free to give me tips and tops, regarding editing, content, voice over, etc. I would really appreciate it!

Here is the link to my latest video:
https://youtu.be/Z8OwIGa-xW0

[oogiebe]

Good quality video.
Some observations. I'm always a tough reviewer when asked as you did. Being nice won't help you.

1-intro way too long
2-analytics a bit shallow
3-voiceover is more gameshow than boxing

I'd watch another if these items are addressed.

Just to be forthright, I couldn't do what you're doing, that's why I'm merely the audience. Good luck with your endeavor!

- Doug

[asmund]

Good quality video.
Some observations. I'm always a tough reviewer when asked as you did. Being nice won't help you.

1-intro way too long
2-analytics a bit shallow
3-voiceover is more gameshow than boxing

I'd watch another if these items are addressed.

Just to be forthright, I couldn't do what you're doing, that's why I'm merely the audience. Good luck with your endeavor!

- Doug

+ 1. I couldnt top this in any way, but agree on advice for a nice view.

[BXNGCNTRL]

Good quality video.
Some observations. I'm always a tough reviewer when asked as you did. Being nice won't help you.

1-intro way too long
2-analytics a bit shallow
3-voiceover is more gameshow than boxing

I'd watch another if these items are addressed.

Just to be forthright, I couldn't do what you're doing, that's why I'm merely the audience. Good luck with your endeavor!

- Doug

Thank you very much for your feedback!!